The Elusive Snake
The greatest thing about the American west is every mile you go, it seems like you are in a new world. I was walking down a path in a deserted sheep camp, a few miles off a Navajo reservation, and while I stopped to peer at the massive mesa in front of me, pondering if I had what it took to scale those walls, I heard a soft rattle. It startled me, so I ran behind a bush. The closest hospital was at least twenty miles away, and I was out there alone. I could not afford a rattlesnake bite. I did not hear the rattle anymore. It was gone, I thought I had run away from it. I walked down the path again, farther down from where I had heard the rattle. After about three steps, I heard it again, but this time distinctly louder.
The first thing that came to my head was, “Where the hell is this snake!”
I began to walk backwards, but the sound got louder. So I walked forwards again, yet the sound still got louder. I ran to another bush off the side of the path. I could still hear the rattle, but it was faint and dying. I waited there hesitantly, maybe an hour, maybe two. When you are alone in nature, duration of time loses its relevance. I began walking on the path again, but slowly. I walked slowly for at least half a mile. I kept looking back, secretly checking if the snake was following me. I did not see anything. I kept walking. And then I heard it, and it was louder than ever. I began a sprint off the path. I kept running till I collapsed. While catching my breath, I lied down. I was losing energy. There were no longer mesas around me, it was desert. I don’t know where I had gone, I could not see the path anymore. At least I was away from that damn snake. I had a pouch with me. I did not foresee any delays, so I only packed a small bottle of water and some nuts. It was getting dark out. I began to worry. I had to find my way back to the path. So I walked towards the sun, It was setting, and I was generally heading west. I hoped I would come across the path as I walked, but I was not that fortunate. I was getting thirsty, my water was almost out. I was not paying attention to where I was going, and I tripped over a small stone. I braced myself for the fall, but was unsuccessful in preventing my right shoulder from hitting a prickly pear cactus. I got up and brushed myself off. I looked at my shoulder, it was bleeding slightly, nothing too bad though. I took another step and I heard it again. It probably was the most terrifying and gruesomely awful sound I had ever heard. I blacked out. When I came too, I found myself staring at the eyes of a saddled horse. I looked at my shoulder. It was as if nothing had happened to it. I stretched for my pouch. There were two full canteens of water, and about three days worth of food. As I stood up I noticed I was not in the desert. I was standing at the edge of a riverbed. Suddenly, the rattling came again. I quickly spun around.
All of a sudden I was back in the desert. I looked at my shoulder, it was all banged up. I looked in my pouch. Just a near empty bottle of water and an empty sack of nuts. I looked down. And there it was. The damn creature was pointing its tongue at me. I looked at it intently, almost warning it not to rattle. It did not heed my warning. I lunged to grab it. I had had enough. I closed my eyes and reached out. Nothing. I felt nothing. I opened my eyes and looked down. There was nothing there. I blacked out again. When I woke up, I could hear the sound of a faint rattle.
Well written
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